Practicing Retouching

Since getting back from PSW in Vegas, I have been spending time looking at Glyn Dewis' workshop on processing the image he calls the editor.  Today I worked with an image I took while attending Texas Schools of Photography in Arlington, Texas this summer. 

One of the instructors walked into our class where Joel Grimes was instructing us in using his technique for shooting portraits using a three light setup.   

I have included images showing Joel shooting with his 3 light setup, screen shots from Lightroom 5 and PS CC and my final processed image.   I did not use the final step in Glyn's process to create the "cartoonish look".  I did with his RAW image in the tutorial.  I felt this image did not warrant a cartoonish look.